“Look” sadi delilah as she pulled out a bone from a cabinet under the glass containing ancient fossils and bones. A museum worker nearby, rushed over to delilah (who he had been keeping a close eye on) to see what she had found. “ omg delilah you’ve found the missing bone” The worker shouted excitedly as he yanked the bone out of her hands and shooting it in the air. This bone had been lost for years and it belonged to the prehistoric moa that lived here thousands of years ago. Later that night delilah’s discovery was reported on the news. Delilah’s family watched intently on the screen to see what the news presenters would say about their amazing daughter. “ The eight of april nineteen - thirty seven the day that four year old delilah made the biggest discovery of all time” one of the news presenters said in disbelief.
“THIS IS THE BIGGEST DISCOVERY THAT’S EVER HAPPENED IN GISBORNE” boasted another news presenter. As delilah heard all these amazing things about her a smile spread across her face. Her family cuddled around her they were so proud of her.
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Yay! you fixed it, Now I can read it with out swiping to the side. Good job Georgia :D
ReplyDeleteHi Georgia, I like how you added brackets for more detail. Next time you should try leaving us on a cliffhanger.
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